Deelie

By Ayleene Thompson

 

Long before the accident and the tragedy that changed her life, members of the Tuesday Morning Bible Study Group referred to her as poor Deelie McDougle. While gazing out the windows of the Butte City Tabernacle Holiness Church, they sometimes spotted her bending down to pet the old bob tail tomcat sunning in front of the post office next door, or noticed how skillfully she picked her way around spots where roots of the giant red oak had buckled the concrete sidewalk.

“She is quite nimble, for a large girl,” one of the ladies might point out. “Poor Deelie. Martin married her on the rebound after Clarisa broke his heart.”

Clarisa had caught the eye of Martin McDougle on the first day she came to work as a  teller at Butte City Bank Of Commerce where he was head of Mortgages & Loans. Within the month he had escorted the willowy blond girl to the July Fourth fireworks display and three times  they had driven across the mountain to Beeville twenty miles away to clog dance.

Martin’s mother, Maggie McDougle, confided to the shampoo woman at the hair dressers where she kept a standing ten o’clock Friday morning appointment that she was not pleased to see her son involved with a young person who was always traipsing off to beauty pageants, a girl living in a double wide with a father who raised thoroughbred horses but admitted he didn’t know jack about bringing up a headstrong daughter.

“Still,” Mrs. McDougle had been quoted as saying, “the two of them could produce fine looking grandchildren.”

A tall muscular man, Martin’s hazel eyes twinkled when he smiled and he always wore brightly colored bow ties with the dark blue suits his mother picked out for him. He had a gap between his upper front teeth, which some of the older citizens called a mark of virtue.

“You can trust a man with a gap,” they said.

By the end of summer, Clarisa had agreed to marry Martin, but two days before the wedding she left town with his diamond and emerald ring still sparkling on her finger. She went with the lean swarthy man who had come looking for her, claiming to represent a modeling agency in Atlanta. He said he had seen her picture in the newspaper the year she was crowned queen of the Miss Crape Myrtle Beauty Pageant.

Clarisa just up and went without a word, deserted Martin in the shadow of the altar, was how his mother described it.

Deelie, a young woman who worked week-ends only at the pastry shop she owned, was hired by the bank as a temporary replacement. She was short, stout and plain as Clarisa was tall, slender and stunning, which prompted an employee in Investments Service to remark that Deelie was not likely to bring home any beauty trophies.

 

On Martin’s thirtieth birthday celebration that year, Maggie McDougle invited a small group of friends to her home to share her traditional chocolate layer cake served with raspberry sherbert and little triangles of wheat bread topped with cream cheese and pineapple. After the last guest had left, the maid who came to tidy up said she overheard Mrs. McDougle say to Martin it was time he got down to the business of starting a family.

“She told him she wasn’t getting any younger and neither was he. She said if he didn’t have a child to carry on the family lineage by the time she passed, his inheritance from her estate would go to the Maggie McDougle Shelter For Abandoned Animals.”

Deelie and Martin got acquainted the following week in the snack room at the bank. He was sitting at a table near the door when she came in for some nacho chips and a Pepsi. After introducing himself, he asked if she had registered downstairs in the lobby for a chance to win two tickets to the John Wayne Film Festival on Saturday night.

“He was my favorite actor,” Martin said.

“Mine, too,” Deelie smiled. “My very favorite.”

They went together to the festival and the next week-end to a folk music concert over in the next county. Before the new year was under way, she accepted his proposal of marriage.

After the wedding ceremony, Mrs. McDougle gifted the couple with money for a down payment on a gray stone house with four bedrooms and a fenced back yard overlooking the valley of silvery spruce pines. Deelie interspersed their pieces of new furniture with heirlooms: an antique corner cupboard, two mahogany drop leaf tables and the blue fainting couch that had belonged to her great-grandmother.

Maggie McDougle confided to members of her Sunday school class that the new home was indeed tastefully furnished.

In the mornings after Martin kissed Deelie goodbye and left for the office, she sat at her desk in the breakfast nook and looked out the windows at the ridges along the mountains where, in winter, snow lay white and silent. She wrote stories about a dog named Flippo, the dog who meowed like a cat. In the evenings when she heard the rumble of her husband’s car in the driveway, she swept the pages into a stack and hid them inside a locked drawer.

Their little girl, Sarah, was born the second year after they married. As she  grew, her hair lay in gold ringlets and her teeth were like little kernels of white corn. Occasionally, upon seeing her, one of the elderly ladies might discretely whisper to another that some day Sarah would become lovelier than Clarisa .

Clarisa began to make trips back to Butte City for Christmas holidays to visit her ailing father. Each time she seemed more blond, more supple and beautiful than before. Deelie, who had  developed a scattering of varicose veins and added weight since giving birth, acknowledged her with a tight lipped smile when they met by chance one night at the Elk Club’s winter dance party. Clarisa had come alone, saying she was no longer with the man who had come to Butte City looking for her, that he had left her in New Orleans..

Two of Martin’s co-workers, who were standing near the dance floor when Martin and Deelie waltzed by, said Martin didn’t seem to notice that Clarisa gazed at him with a hungry sadness in her eyes.

After they left the party, Martin stopped at the Polar Bear Ice Cream & Sandwich Bar. While he picked up Deelie’s order of a chocolate malted and double order of fries, she telephoned home to remind  the sitter  that Sarah’s cough medicine was in the refrigerator if she should need it.

 

On Sarah’s fifth birthday, Deelie buckled her in the back seat of the car and headed for Beeville to watch the troop of clowns and acrobats perform in the traveling circus. It was a morning in early autumn. Wispy patches of fog still hovered over the hollows and the first splashes of reds and yellows had started to brush the tree tops along the high ridges. Later that day, a neighbor recalled waving to Deelie at the stop light before she entered the highway.

The accident happened just outside the town limits of Beeville. An eyewitness to the tragedy said the truck loaded with sheets of plate glass went out of control on the steep downgrade of the mountain road and slammed into the rear of Deelie’s car. Sarah, when it was over, still sat upright in her seat. Her head lay on the floor, severed from her body by a jagged piece of glass.

Weeks later Deelie left the hospital with her right arm in a cast and her face laced with rows of angry red stitches. When friends came to bring a potted plant, or if they saw her walking along the street, nobody seemed to know what to say or to look directly into her eyes. Their glances appeared to be unfocused, as though they must greet her quickly and be on their way.

“The poor thing,” a woman whispered to a friend one morning while waiting in the check-out line at the grocery store. She wiped the tears from her eyes at the sight of Deelie pushing an empty shopping cart back and forth past the mound of cabbage heads stacked one on top of another in the produce department.

Clarisa came back to town that year for the annual Christmas dance at the Elk’s Club. She wore a red sheath dress that accentuated her thinness and the pale skin low on her back. Deelie, who insisted on going to the dance despite Martin’s protests that she needed to rest,   covered her scars with a heavy application of  medium beige blemish concealer and drank three double vodka martinis, one after another, before Martin took her home and put her to bed.

Deelie began to write again, more stories about the dog named Flippo, and hiding them in the drawer with the other pages. One day when the holidays were over, she put away her typewriter, dropped a sharp knife and a hairbrush in her pocket and drove across town to the new K-Mart. A clerk who was taking inventory in the toy department said Deelie walked up and down  the aisle, starring at the rows of dolls before taking one of the more expensive ones off the shelf.

“She just stood there, brushing its long blond hair,” the clerk later told the store manager, “and then she whipped out a knife and chopped off its head.”

The officer investigating the incident said Deelie’s screams could be heard outside in the parking lot. He said to his wife at supper that it was the saddest sight he had ever seen , this poor woman cradling the severed head of a doll against her breast, brushing its long blond curls. And the wailing, he said, the awful sounds of her sorrow.

Later, Maggie McDougle told one of the members of her garden club, when Martin took Deelie away to the sanitarium in Nashville she  hardly carried a thing with her except the clothes on her back and a drawer full of papers. The ladies all agreed he had no choice but to commit her to the psychiatric clinic. Poor Deelie might never be quite right again, they sighed, and speculated on what would happen now that she was gone and Clarisa was moving back  to take care of her father.

 

Clarisa began to invite Martin for Sunday night suppers at  her father’s home, and soon afterwards she made an appointment with the dentist to fix the gap between his upper front teeth. He stopped going to see Deelie every week-end, limiting his visits to once a month. By the end of the year he seldom went at all. He mentioned to an employee at the bank that Deelie had been released from the clinic, had taken an apartment in Nashville and enrolled in creative writing at the university.

It was almost three years before she came back to Butte City. The night manager at the Mountain View Inn said the woman traveling with Deelie was the one who had sold her work to the New York publishing company. The evening edition of the Carolina Bugle carried the news of her scheduled appearance at The Book Nook to sign copies of her best selling children’s story, FLIPPO, THE DOG WHO MEOWED LIKE A CAT.

Deelie asked Clarisa to meet her for lunch the day she left for New York City. Several people in the Blue Peacock restaurant where they met mentioned Clarisa’s ill fitting dress and how the bright yellow hue made her skin look sallow and faded. Someone commented wasn’t it a shame the way Clarisa let her looks go and Martin had become practically a recluse since Maggie McDougle passed away and left the family money to the abused animal shelter.

Deelie wore a powder blue silk suit with a single strand of pearls. Her hair was styled short and smooth and the scars on her face had healed without leaving a flaw. The young waitress who served Deelie’s spinach salad whispered to the girl on check-out that Deelie might pass for a movie star or fashion model.

Diners sitting in the booth next to Clarisa and Deelie said they couldn’t hear if Deelie explained why she decided to leave Martin for good and set out on her own. Some speculated that coming back to take up her life again would be too painful, or that she had turned out to be one of those modern women bent on proving herself. Others said perhaps Martin was not the man they had thought him to be.

“It’s only fair you should have him back,” Deelie was overheard to say to Clarisa as she picked up the check and turned to go. “Martin was, after all, yours in the beginning. But he gave me the best part of him. He gave me Sarah.”

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