FIRST DATE

By Mike Gardebled

 

He set up a chair to watch the past drive by.

And others, much like he,

Lost themselves to a memory.

                                                                                                                 Robin Dorfman

                The old swag lamp cast a warm glow over the table, its light fading into darkness long before reaching the walls. Ramona and I sat opposite each other. She stared, silently defying me to make a move. I had no fear of her under any circumstances, nor would I disappoint her challenge. I reached under the lamp in her direction.

            “There! My rook has captured your remaining bishop. You can see your position is hopeless. Knock over your king! Let’s seek less daunting tasks this Friday evening. Tasks that do not require a chess board between us.”

            “Wow! Well, that does surprise me,” Ramona exclaimed. “I mean your move, not your not-so-subtle advances. Hmm, I can analyze this awhile, huh?” she asked coyly, knowing I’m a sucker for her words.

            I gave her that luxury before defeat, saying, “Take as long as you’d like.”

            Ramona leaned toward the table, staring at the board, then folded her hands together and rested her chin on them. On these Friday nights, we always had a glass of  “zin,” as she called it. White Zinfandel, our favorite chess time beverage, and the only time I smoked a Churchill cigar. She’d fuss, but it was her father, Doctor Rice, who introduced me to them in this very room, leaving her with little high ground to fuss about.

            She was deep in concentration; I was free to roam, and the shadows obliged. As she sat there, so focused, I quietly leaned back away from the lamp, the wine glasses, the chess pieces, and my soul mate for the only part of my life that mattered. I looked at those sensuous green eyes with the glowing sparkle that passed unchanged over the decades. Her hair had hints of gray and wrinkles were making their appearance, but there was a beauty that grows and shows only in a woman who has some unconquerable inner strength. Except to poets and philosophers, it is indefinable.

            Almost as if alone, I drifted aimlessly back, back over our years, until thoughts of a friend’s poem jarred me. I didn’t have to close my eyes for Robin Dorfman’s poem to take me to a place from long ago: to a first date. The poem had been published in a poetry quarterly, and when I first read it, I wondered how Robin could have known so much about me. Part of her poem sprang into my mind as I watched Ramona. “And some reminisced/‘Bout a long-ago kiss/And the cool of the leather — /Sweet times spent together/Liquid lightning emblazoned the sides/As dice swung freely with the rhythm of  the ride.” Suddenly, all over again, it was a Friday night in September 1961, and I had a blind date with a girl named Ramona Rice.

            Several times I had seen her when I picked up my kid sister, Katharine, from Mount Carmel Academy. Her gestures, her walk, everything intrigued me, even from afar. And she was a fine looking brunette to boot. Katharine didn’t know her, but fortunately, she knew Mary Hare, the self-proclaimed matchmaker who, in turn, knew Ramona, a senior. A date was finally arranged

at a cost of five bucks each to Katharine and Mary, but nothing is to extreme when wanting to meet a young lady. Unfortunately, I discovered competition. She was dating Billy Hacker, a big gorilla who played fullback for Warren Easton High, one of the tougher schools in New Orleans. Tulane, LSU, and Ole Miss were vying for his skills in ‘62; everybody in New Orleans knew of him, including me. Fortunately, I had a trump card: a car! And it was a convertible. And I was a college man, albeit a freshman. By my reckoning, that would overcome the deficit in my overwhelming lack of athletic skills.

            To my car’s credit, the blind date started wonderfully. I arrived at her home five minutes early. Old Faithful’s reliability was sometimes questioned by my buddies, but it got us home more times than not. The rag top leaked a little and occasionally it didn’t operate properly, and the gas gauge was stuck on “Full.” The list was longer, but I considered this inconsequential when it came to dating.

            I rang the door bell, hoping Ramona’s mother would answer. Fathers were not the preferred company for introductions. Mrs. Rice opened the door and with a smile, invited me in. So far, so good, I thought. “You must be Mark Gardner,” she asked, knowing I was.

            No ma’am, I’m Elvis, I thought to myself. “Yes, ma’am. It is a pleasure to meet you,” I said respectfully. One down and one to go.

            “Ramona will be ready in a moment, Mark.” She continued, “Come and meet Ramona’s father. I’m sure he’d like to meet you.”

             “It’d be my pleasure ma’am.” My thoughts weren’t the same.

            “George, the young man taking Mona out this evening is here.”

            “Bring him here, here in the den, dear.” He sounded like the Grim Reaper calling for me.

            “O.K., honey. Com’on, Mark.” Mrs. Rice said, beckoning me to follow.

            “Yes ma’am,” I answered cheerfully, as though I had a choice.

            “What college do you go to Mark? Ramona tells me you graduated from Jesuit High last year.”

            I didn’t have a chance to answer before we entered the den. Ramona’s father’s back faced us. He turned as he rose from his chair. “Well, Mark, how are you?” he asked.

            I gasped in disbelief, swallowing hard, my eyes bugging out of my head. “Doctor Rice!” I exclaimed, as I stood before my Chemistry 101 professor.

            “Oh, sweet Jesus how....” Whoops! I thought to myself.

            “It’s a pleasure to meet you, sir,” I stammered, trying to recover, my face flushed with embarrassment. “You’re Ramona’s father!”

            “Do I know you, son?” he asked quizzically.

            “Ahem, I’m in one of your classes, Doctor Rice,” I said, praying he wouldn’t prod further.

            “Which one?”

            Mrs. Rice interrupted, “Let me check on Mona, dear, while you talk to this nice young man.”

            “Oh, that’s O.K., Mrs. Rice, we have plenty of time,” I said, not wanting to be alone with Doctor Rice.

            “George, Mark graduated from Jesuit last year.

            “I won’t be long, I’m sure Doctor Rice and you have things to talk about,” she said, leaving quickly.

            “Oh-h, Jesuit High, that’s nice,” he said, “and what class of mine did you say you were in, Mike? The semester is young, so I don’t yet know many of my students.”        

            “It’s ‘Mark’ sir; I’m in your 11 o’clock  class. Most interesting, too,” I explained. Don’t ask me my major, I thought to myself.

            “Well, how do you like Tulane?”

            “Very well, sir.” I said little, hoping to quell his curiosity.

            “And, what’s your major?”

            “I’m not sure yet, Doctor Rice, but I do like the sciences,” I replied, seeking brownie points.

            Mrs. Rice called out, “George, Mark! We’re in the living room, com’on y’all. Mona and Mark have to leave soon to be on time for the play.”

            I quietly gave thanks to God for Mrs. Rice’s timely return.

            “Have a nice time kids,” Mrs. Rice remarked.

            Doctor Rice wouldn’t shut up. “Yeah. Drive carefully, and have my daughter back at 11:15. Enjoy The King and I. Watch out for rain.” He kept going on, even as Mrs. Rice was closing the front door.

            “George, you nagged that poor boy, such a nice young man, and a student of yours, no less. Shame!”

            Doctor Rice grunted and shrugged his shoulders. “Nonsense, did you see that car? It’s a junk heap, flames painted on the sides, dice hanging from the rearview mirror. He’s a hot-rodder, for sure.”

            “Darling, Mona’s just going out with the boy, she’s not marrying him, for goodness sake. You men!” Mrs. Rice said, shaking her head.

            The King and I wasn’t a John Wayne western, but Ramona loved it, and that made me happy. We decided to bowl a few frames at Mid-City Bowling Alley since it was a Friday night hangout for many of her friends. Hopefully, they would make a first date less threatening for both of us.

            A slight sprinkle had begun as we pulled into the parking lot. She saw some girlfriends from Mount Carmel and didn’t wait for me to open her door. Out she jumped, slamming the door behind her, creating new rattles.

            Much to my chagrin, one chatty little friend, Judy Fiore from Boston, said, “I thought you were dating Billy Hacker.” Her accent was still Bostonian thick, and it drove me crazy.

            “He’s here?!” asked Ramona.

            “No, no!” responded Judy, not the least bit concerned by her faux pas.

            Ramona’s standing went up a notch when she said, “Well, you know, Judy, I do not go steady with him, and I’m enjoying my date with Mark very much.”

            “Uh, why don’t we all go in and bowl, girls.” I responded hastily, before Judy could screw things up.

            “Mark, what about the car top?”

            “If it rains, I’ll run down and put it up,” I said confidently, then bravely added, “Can I call you Mona?”

            “Yeah, sure, I’d like that.” A telltale sign: She liked me.

            The evening was storybook perfect. Naturally, it all ended too soon. We had to leave;

only 30 minutes to curfew, and it would not be missed. There was no doubt, she couldn’t resist me. Another date was on the horizon.

            Six blocks away, we caught the red light at Carrollton and Canal Street. The car sputtered slightly, shook, sputtered again, then died. “Uh-oh,” I muttered.

            “Well! Why won’t your car go?” quizzed Ramona. “And I think you’d better put up the top now, don’t you? It’s starting to rain.”

            “Hmm, yeah, that’s a good idea. Old Faithful will start in a minute or two,” I told her, while turning the key several times with nothing positive to show for it.

            “Are you out of gas?” she asked, looking over at the gauge.

            “Oh, no, no! I’m sure of that.”

            “Yeah, I see it’s full. Mark, please put up the top!”

            “You bet!” I said, pushing the button to raise the top.

            The shrill sound of the top rising was nerve wracking. The off-white top groaned, a loud screeching noise wailed from the rear. Suddenly, the sound stopped; then the top stopped — straight up in the air.

            “Mark! What happened? Can you fix it?”

            “Not here.”

            “Very funny! It’s raining, you know! You better do something!” Her voice now had a hint of anger in it.

            “I know! I know!” I said, confidently. “Look, there’s a phone booth over by the bus stop. I’ll call my father to come get us; then we’ll call you father. He’ll understand.

            “Holy cow! All I have is a five-dollar bill,” I exclaimed, becoming desperate as the rain started falling harder.

            “Let me check,” she said, leering at me while getting wetter. “No, no change! Now what?”

            I sought understanding, saying, “Gosh, this has never happened before on a date.”

            “On a date!” she yelled. “You dummy, so it has happened before. Great!

            “I’m gonna drown here like a rat in this stupid car of yours. It won’t start. The top is sticking straight up in the air. We can’t make a phone call. And now I’ve got 15 minutes to get home. What next?”

            “I have an idea. Really,” I begged, “at least we can stay dry.”

            “Go ahead, tell me,” she said, more than a little exasperated.

            “The trunk is pretty big. I’ll open it, and we can sit in it to keep the rain off.”

            “Oh, your trunk door works — does it?! What a pleasant surprise.” She sounded sarcastic, but given our circumstances, she agreed.

            When we got out of the car, I mistakenly noted her wet appearance. “You sure look good in that wet sweater,” I commented. Her remarks were not ladylike.

            So, on a Friday night in September of 1961, at a stoplight in the pouring rain, we sat huddled in the grubby open trunk of a stalled ‘52 Oldsmobile convertible. Wisdom dictated that I not ask about a second date.    

            All was quiet — until the police car pulled up, red light flashing.

            “Ah-ha!” she yelled, turning toward me, “he can take me home, and you can live out your miserable life in this trunk as far as I care.”

            “Wait, Mona. I want to go — to explain to your father.”

            “You’re nuts!

            “Wait till I get my hands on that Mary Hare for setting me up with you, you idiot!” she said as she huffed off toward the policeman, who was now standing outside his car, scratching his head.

            “No! Wait! I paid Mary five bucks to arrange....”

            “What?! You did what?!” she erupted, spewing venom.

            “Mona, I ... I....”

            “Mona! Don’t you ever call me that again!” she yelled, walking toward the police car. “Better yet, don’t ever call me again! Don’t ever see me again! Don’t ever think of....” her voice faded off as she slammed the car door behind her.      
            The policeman walked over, unsympathetic to Ramona’s hollering, to my stuck convertible top, to the rain. “Son, I’ll drop off your girlfriend; you stay here till I come back,” he ordered, grinning.

            “Yes sir, officer,” I said, “but I don’t think ‘girlfriend’ is the right term to use.”

            “Stay dry!” he said, as he walked back to his car, got in, and drove off — now laughing. The flashing red light disappeared into the night, signaling to the world my date was over.

            “Darling! Are you awake?” Ramona Rice Gardner asked. “One glass of zin, and you’re off in la-la land. What were you daydreaming about?”

            “A distant evening in autumn,” I responded, chuckling.

            “Back to chess, dear. Your move did indeed capture my bishop, but....”

            I hastily interrupted, “So, you do see the futility in continuing!”

            “Whoa! Not so quick. Let me explain my move,” noted Ramona.

            “Sweetheart, perhaps you would do well to remember Purdy’s quote, ‘Chess is as much a mystery as women,’ and Lord knows you’re still a mystery to me. Why confuse me more?”

            “You sure?”

            “Yep,” I responded.

            “Well, love, I guess you’re right. By now, I oughtta know not to argue with you.”

            “Yep, that’s my girl.”

            “O.K.!” Ramona smirked, then laughed. She reached under the old swag lamp and moved her knight onto the spot that was home for my  rook, announcing, “Checkmate!”

            “What! How! Uh, you sure?” I said, shocked.

            “Yes, darling, you lost — again,” she remarked.

            For a few moments I drifted, again thinking of that first date, our two girls who were now women, a granddaughter, our years with each other — so many of them — then I leaned across the table, looked wistfully into Ramona’s eyes and whispered, “No, I’ve never lost, not even once.”

            She smiled and was quiet for many long moments, then said, “Me neither!”

 

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