2007 "Let's Write" Literary Contest Fiction Winners

 

First Place

DRIFTWOOD

By Dixon Hearne

        We don't know how long the body had been there behind the outhouse. To tell you the truth, the smell mingled so easily with the local odors it didn't stand out none. The little shack sits cockeyed on a patch of shiftin' ground out there surrounded on three sides by weeds and bushes and on the threshold of a dense wood. It was Ruby that found it, chasin' after our new pup she turned loose for the first time out of doors. He ran straight away toward the outhouse and then the thicket, like he knew just where he was headed. Sweet little ball of fur licks your face clean of anything left over from eatin'. We lost his mama givin' him birth. He's the only one that made it out of six, and too big for her to carry and deliver. My darlin' girl, I buried her out there by the front porch, where she spent most of her life standin' guard or greetin' company. I do miss her so.

Anyway, Ruby says that body - behind the outhouse - must've been there quite a spell, on account of it had already popped and sunk in at the stomach and the rats and insects had helped themselves. It was a man, though, and somewhere in his early twenties the coroner later tells us. Hit in the head and shot in the side, he says to us, somewhere near his kidneys and ruptured.

The day Ruby found him, this place was swarmin' with people - police and coroner, radio, newspaper and TV cameras, even though we ain't got a station for seventy-five miles - and every one of them firin' off questions so fast it made our heads swim. I remember this one man wanted me to tell him "real slow" and "in detail" exactly who was in the outhouse at the time and what they heard and saw and smelled that gave it away. When I told him it didn't happen that way at all, he rolled his eyes at me and says, "We got to have a story that folks want to hear. How shocked and scared you all were -that kind of thing." And when I told him again it didn't happen like that, he just turned around and went chasin' off after Ruby for somethin' better.

A dead man lyin' behind the outhouse is indeed unusual, but it seemed to me they ought to stick to lookin' around for some kind of evidence - clues on how he got there. You know? Ruby didn't do no better with their questions than me, and they finally hauled the body off in a bag sometime mid-afternoon. But I have to tell you, the smell was worse after he left. I don't know why that was.

That was on a Wednesday, and by Friday they came to tell us we was wanted at the courthouse. So Ruby put on her blue organza, and I changed into my Sunday meetin' suit - we don't know how they dress for everyday at the courthouse - and off we go in my pickup right behind the sheriffs car.

They don't have parkin' out front and we pulled around back where the police cars and the judges park, and we go through a side door. It's the first time Ruby and me ever entered the Union County Courthouse in our lives, but it looked just like it did on the bank calendar we get every year, only bigger and it smelled funny. And then they lead us down a long hall and into a side room where a woman sits at a desk and two other men sit beside her. She was real nice at first - sayin' hello and thank you for comin' and all - but that disappeared like a puff of smoke once we got around to business.

"Now, Mrs. Botell," she starts on my wife again, "suppose you tell us what you were doin' when you found the body."

"Do you really need to ask?" Ruby says back to her. "I was comin' out of the outhouse. Seems to me that's sufficient information."

"AFTER you came out, Mrs. Botell," she says sternly.

"I heard a rustlin', and I looked around behind to see what it was - snakes sometimes crawl right in on you - and I saw somethin' yellow peekin' through the weeds. So I took a stick and pressed them down a bit, and that's when I could make out that it was a body."

"Did you recognize the person?"

"Wasn't much to recognize. Did you see it?" Ruby says to her, wide-eyed.

"I'll tell you like I told Mr. Botell here: Don't get smart with me. You have a dead body on your property to explain, ma'am."

After she asked us a few more questions and got it all wrote down, the sheriff escorted us back down the hall and out to my truck. He said they had some people comin' in from Little Rock to try and give the man's face some features and then put it in the papers and on the TV. Miss Trailer never did tell us her official title and that kind of chapped Ruby when she thought about it on the way home.

Come Monday, the first pictures show up on telephone poles and in the post office. How they came up with his face, we had no idea, but it looked suspiciously like Mitch Tanner's boy, the one that went off into the Navy and never came back. Of course, that's been five years now, but that's who the picture favored, the Tanner boy. Next thing we know, the man who identified himself as the director tells me he needs to use our house, on account of he's got a new angle on the dead man - he lives here and gets shot in the parlor, before he's chased out to the outhouse and then the woods.

"Maybe we can just get rid of the crap house altogether," the man says to his partner. "Just takes the viewer's eye away from Crutch Diller here."

Crutch Diller - that's what they name the dead body after they bring him back to life and have him sittin' around my livin' room. I don't mind sayin' it gave me the willies just to think about it. I didn't mind a bit him lyin' down to rest out there behind the outhouse, but I just don't favor the idea of him parked in my parlor.

The director man then says to me that it would be a lot better if they put us up at a hotel while they're shootin' the picture, and don't I think the house could use a coat of paint, too. And though I can't complain about the coat of paint, I ain't spent a night in another bed in all the thirty years Ruby and me been married, and I ain't movin' out so some dead man can move in. And when I tell him so, he waves around enough cash to tempt a nun, and I quick start figurin' out how to break the news to Ruby.

After a fair amount of head scratchin' and discussion, Ruby says okay, since Miss Trailer had told her we'd made our own damn bed and we knew what to do with it. And for three weeks we holed up in town in a big room with a ceilin' fan and indoor toilet, and to tell you the truth, we did find some pleasure in it.

The picture people invited us back out the last day - along with the sheriff and even Miss Trailer - to see what a smart, fine job they were doin' on the story. They especially wanted us to see their latest angle, with the dead man now resurrected and tearin' toward town with a machete in one hand and gun in the other. They had cut him down to one leg, but said he looked better like that - with a peg leg. Said it would sell more tickets. And that explains why they invited all the others out, on account of they needed to use the town next.

Ain't no need to tell you they paid everybody enough in money and small parts to keep them all happy - even Miss Trailer. And ever since that movie came out, we've got cars and trucks, and even buses full of fools ridin' past here day and night, and all of them callin' out, Crutch Diller Lady killer! Crutch Diller Lady killer\ And the local police still don't know who the young man really is.

We hear they're makin' good money on the picture, though. But every time I see it in the paper, I can't help thinking about that dead body like the piece of driftwood Ruby found washed up on the beach in Biloxi and keeps on the coffee table. Weathered to a shapeless gnarl, the thing is worth more now than it ever was alive.

And even with the money the picture folks paid us, we still live too far out to get indoor plumbin' - so we just make do till a septic tank arrives. But we took the light out of the outhouse and painted it flat black so it don't stand out at night. It's been pushed over once already, and Ruby's afraid she'll be sittin' right there in it the next time. As for us, we can't wait for the weeds and bushes and forest critters to return - and all the city vermin to go. And the next time we find somethin' dead behind the outhouse, believe me we'll just say a prayer and let it lie. Amen


Second Place

SCARECROW

By Dixon Hearne

DeCloris Pelto sits on a giant oak stump out back of Noah Riley's department store, scaling a stringer of bony fish he pulled in from the bayou. Flies swarm upon waves of heat, fluttering briefly when he shoos them with his fish sealer. Macey Rae Reed studies the scene through the backdoor window, wondering just whose property DeCloris threw his line from. He'd been warned off a dozen times - chased a few others - but he keeps better tabs now on who's home when he decides to trespass.

In the front door of Riley's barges Mrs. Grady Kraw with her prissy daughter and it jerks Macey's attention back to her work. Clerking is not her life's calling, Macey likes to tell herself, but it does help put bread on the table and keep her kids in shoes. Last thing she needed today, though, was two fussbudgets plucking at her nerve endings.

Things had been hard enough since her husband, Cole, took a job out of state. It takes most of his pay, as it turns out, just to meet his rent and keep himself fed, but he stuffs an envelope diligently once a week with whatever is left over and sends it home. Thirteen months is a long time to separate grieving hearts. Every time the store's front door jingle, it draws Macey's eyes up with hope that Cole might be standing there. But there would be no warm surprises today or any day soon.

"Morning, Macey," Mrs. Kraw chirps, tweaking at her new hairdo all pumped up and torched forward. We'll be over in patterns when you get the time. Tiffany here seen the cutest blouse on the TV. Ya'll do carry Spiegel, now don't you?"

"Yes ma'am. We keep them on the last aisle over there, just like always," Macey replies, pointing a polite finger toward the far wall. She follows quickly after them, taking note of Miss Tiffany's bulging backside.

"I want the cotton print. That pattern right there," the girl says, snatching at a bolt of bright pink material glaring from the second shelf. When Macey doesn't move fast enough for her, she shoves her big self through the upright bolts and finishes pawing it down.

"You gonna let that man stay on this property?" Mrs. Kraw blurts out, all astir. Macey turns around to find the woman wagging her knobby finger at the back door window. "That little convict's been pullin' fish out of our bayou again. Just look at him out there spillin' fish innards on private property here." She turns back around to Macey with a scornful eye: "Does Noah Riley know about this?"

"We ain't got time to worry about that right now," Tiffany butts in. "I want my pattern and material," she says, loud and pouty-faced. "Now!" she stamps, drawing her fat lips to a sneer. Tiffany was noted for sassing and hollering at her mama in public -the kind of nasty disposition she didn't need to spoil her chances any further. Up close, Macey notices for the first time that the girl has practically no eyebrows on her forehead, just racing stripes of heavy mascara arched high above two beady eyes - buried in swatches of blue-green shadow meant to make them larger and draw out their hues. But she looks almost circus-like right now, with her pimply face all fuss red and ready to pop and her hair all aglow in bright orange spikes.

Out back, DeCloris goes right on with his scaling and gutting, not knowing that a storm cell is brewing just inside Riley's back door. Pretty soon, though, his humming grows so loud that Mrs. Kraw decides she wants it stopped. Immediately.

"You go out there and run that little vagrant off- or I will!" she says to Macey with a huff. "He ain't got no business smellin' up the streets and stores with them stolen fish."

At this point, Tiffany grabs hold of her mama's arm and jerks her attention back to the fabric rack. "Just pay for the damn patterns and material and let's go. I ain't got all day," she says to her and stamps her foot again. "I want you to finish that blouse for me to wear tonight!" With that, she plops a pair of scissors on the cutting table and instructs Macey to lop off enough for the job, "And be quick about it!" she snaps. The air has grown too tense for any further pleasantries, and Macey does her best to finish up the transaction on a positive note. But it's just too much to ask for.

Rap-rap-rap, comes a sudden knocking at the back door. There in the window pane appears a framed bust of DeCloris Pelto, so stark and sudden it gives Mrs. Kraw quite a start.

"Whatever that little heathen scarecrow wants can wait," Tiffany shouts, stamping her foot once more, only harder this time.

"I'll only be a second, I promise," Macey says to her, and hurries to the back door. DeCloris stands bent over and pitiful looking. His arm is extended and blood is oozing in a steady stream from thumb to elbow. Flies have followed the scent and buzz about aggressively, and Macey draws back at first sight of him up close and personal -from his mud-crusted neck to his scabby knees and bony feet.

"Scuse' me ma'am," he says to her, "do you have a rag or somethin' I can wrap off my cut with?" By now the blood has formed a small puddle near his feet. Macey quick grabs a sheet of tissue paper used for boxing and gouges it into the wound.

"You hold this tight while I call a doctor," she says to DeCloris, "I'll be right back."

"Get that heathen out the door!" comes a mean voice from the other room. "He ain't got no business in here. Send him down to Charity Hospital where he belongs." Mrs. Kraw had spotted the blood glistening from the sun's reflection.

"Tell him I ain't got time for this!" Tiffany yells at her, looking past DeCloris as if he was transparent. "Charity's out there to take care of his kind. This is a store. I'm a customer. And I need help right now, Missy. You either get over here and check me out or I 'm pickin' up this phone and callin' old man Riley right now!"

The ice-hearted young woman means every word of it, Macey is sure. But she chooses to ignore it long enough to change the bloody tissue on the man's hand and tie it off with some white cotton ribbon. All the while, the phone dial is spinning, and Mrs. Kraw stands by watching with both hands on her hips and one eyebrow drawn up to an evil point.

"We ain't used to bein' treated any such way, Macey Reed. Maybe you'll remember that if Noah Riley lets you keep this job. I been tradin' here for twenty years and you give more attention to that little white trash convict than a payin' customer."

By now, DeCloris has slipped back out the door, closing it quietly behind him. Macey is incensed at the woman's behavior and that of her hateful daughter. She takes the phone from Tiffany's hand and sets it back on the cradle, calmly. There was no answer on the other end.

"I ain't leavin' without my pattern and silk print," the girl spits at Mrs. Kraw. "And I'm sendin' you the bill for fixin' the broken nail I got dialin' that phone, Macey Reed. Now I've got sit through another manicure on account of you and that little moron!" The girl looks to Macey like she's just about to have a stroke. "I'll be in the car!" she yells at Mrs. Kraw and charges out the door.

There on the sidewalk, hunched over and grinning, stands DeCloris Pelto. Tiffany throws him a hateful stare. "Out of my way, you ugly little scarecrow! Get back down to the trashy end of shanty town where you belong."

Right behind her comes Mrs. Kraw, stomping through the door fit to be tied. "Macey!" she yells back. "Macey Rae Reed, you get out here this instant!"

The door jingles open for the third time, and Macey stops still at the threshold. She had just barely exhaled her pent-up frustrations, and now this.

"Just look at that little heathen creature," the woman spouts. "Monkey brown with old dirt. If you want to be Miss Good Samaritan, sister, why don't you give him a steel wool and some lye soap? And while you're at it, maybe you can scrape him clean enough so we can all see him before we smell him comin' for a change. Ugly, ugly little scarecrow!"

"I believe the Bible says something about all of us being the same in His eyes, Mrs. Kraw," Macey says back to her. "He's got a good heart, I just know it - if anybody took the time to look for it."  Sensing she'd just crossed the line between Macey Sales

Clerk and Macey Human Being, she stops short of telling the two what she really wants to say.

"He ain 't the work of the Lord, Macey Reed," the woman preaches, all haughty and holier than thou. "And I'm beginning to have my doubts about you, too. Defendin' that heathen scarecrow. Hmh!" She then jerks her head and motions Tiffany it's time to go.

"We are all our brothers' keepers," Macey shoots back at her. To hell with my job, she thinks to herself. "Inner beauty is more."

Miss Tiffany pivots quickly on her heal and shows Macey a hateful smirk. "Who cares? People say that God gave me beautiful bedroom eyes to recommend me, and he's just a filthy little freak. A mistake." With that remark, the two women turn and flounce off down the street.

DeCloris had disappeared during the altercation, and Macey makes her way back to what she's being paid for - not that a soul was waiting in line to be helped. At least she could work on inventory in the back room for awhile to take her mind off the ugly matter. She longs for Cole more than ever now, for his strength and reassurance that she had done the right thing, defended the right person, the right principles. After all, the man is indeed known to trespass on others' property to fish the bayou - which, in some odd respect, adds stealing to an already pitiful list of faults.

Macey ponders hard on the matter as she studies DeCloris through the backdoor window, where he is once again perched on the oak stump, licking his wounds, twitching his little bird feet and grinning back at her. It makes her feel humble about her own trifles. But her heart being more poetic than pure, she can't help picturing Miss Tiffany Kraw captured right there beside DeCloris Pelto in the window frame, for all eternity. Her and her new pink blouse and bedroom eyes.


Third Place

MEDALS AND BODY BAGS

By David L. Reeve

CHAPTER ONE -- MERRY FUCKING CHRISTMAS

Grazing about, Alex recognized a warmth he hadn't realized he missed. Mom buzzing happily about the kitchen in her trademark sweater featuring Santa amid six stupidly grinning reindeer, noses flashing red in sequence. Nearby Melissa poured creamy eggnog into mistletoe decorated glasses. Dad and Sis were in the basement working up an appetite playing Virtual tennis. In the background, a muted Handel's "Messiah" lent a solemn reminder that peace and goodwill was what the holidays were really about.

His standing in the kitchen door wearing a dark blue, Navy uniform jumpsuit with "MACKENZIE" emblazoned in one inch white letters over the left, breast pocket didn't seem at all odd. Odd was Melissa in a skimpy, semi-sheer, black, party outfit. Bad enough she had worn the same thing that night in a crowded Bourbon Street bar when she dumped him for the band's lead singer. Flaunting herself in it around of his family was an insult not to be tolerated. The warm, homey feeling gone, he started forward to pitch the bitch headfirst into the nearest snowbank.

"...Battle Stations, Alert Level Red, DEFCON One in effect." The announcement, stated in calm, modulated tones by the ship's mainframe AI, came through his Inter-Ship Communications earlink, replacing the soft drone of Handel's most famous work.

Irked at being interrupted before he could get his hands on Melissa, Alex sat up, dimly aware he had fallen asleep on a couch in the Recreation Room. Yawning, he wondered what idiot would schedule a drill when the bulk of the crew of the USS Maine was on shore leave, partying down on the lunar surface of Charon Forward.

"Probably some jerk-off, junior officer, pissed at being on duty. What a merry fucking Christmas this is." Grumbling, he stood, forgetting completely about the palm computer on his lap. The book sized device, purchased for an entire months pay, clattered to the carpeted deck, landing screen side up.

Arm outstretched, he bent to retrieve it, then froze as the message from his earlink finally sank in. "Holy shit, Alert Level Red means Hostile Action Imminent," he mumbled aloud, then recalled that DEFCON ONE was short for Defense Condition One, a protocol strictly used for war.

"Jesus Christ...naw, I got to be dream..."

Like a giant invisible hand swatting a gnat, the shock wave slammed him into the armrest of couch, then forward to land face down on the carpet. The lighting flickered, then died, leaving only the faint glow from the screen of the palm computer laying a few feet away. Stunned, Alex slowly climbed to his feet, staring stupidly around the room, eyes attempting to pierce the darkness. Seconds later the emergency lighting clicked on, casting the room in a dim, twilight illumination.

"Man your Battle Stations. Man your Battle Stations. We're under attack. I say again, we are under attack." The announcement, made by a Human voice this time, wailed over both the ship's PA system and his ISC earlink, creating a distorted, double echo in his head. Worse, the echoed voice sounded like someone trying to remain calm while all hell is breaking loose and failing badly

Shaking his head clear, Alex stumbled toward the exit hatch, nearly reaching it when a second shock wave rolled through. This one sent him lurching backward into the room's interior. Arms flaying wildly, he vainly tried to stay upright, only to collide against the corner of a pool table. Spinning, the air knocked from his lungs, he tripped over his own feet and fell into a twisted sprawl.

Untangling his legs, Alex sat upright, painfully gasping for air, fingers gingerly probing aching ribs and wondering if any were broken. Two more shock waves, one following the other so close as to almost merge, interrupted the speculation by bouncing him along the carpeted deck like a stone skipped across a pond.

Coming to a stop next to same couch he'd started at, Alex managed to grasp its soft covering and pull himself to an wobbly, upright position.

"We're getting the shit hammered out of us." The realization that the Alert announcement and shock waves were related events melded in his brain in a single moment of crystal clear thought.

Injured ribs numbed by pain-killing adrenaline, he scrambled for a another try at the exit hatch, mind focused on a desperate need to get to his Battle Station. He led Damage Control Team Delta in Aft Section Five and they relied on him to be there. Finally reaching the hatch, he bolted through and sprinted down the maze-like corridors.

Training and months of practice drills kicked in. Running, he began scanning the wall mounted radiation monitors. Normally white, the monitor changed color when exposed to radiation. Green signified Danger-Take Precautions, red meant Evacuate-Seek Treatment. Solid black was lethal exposure. With the military's typically grim humor, an instructor in Basic Training had seriously told his trainee's, "If the RM is black, find a comfortable seat, take a deep breath, carefully put your head between your legs, then kiss your sweet ass goodbye, because you're a dead man."

More shock waves swept the ship making Alex feel like a Ping Pong ball dropped in an elevator shaft as he used a drop chute to descend two deck levels toward Aft Section Five. Exiting, he caught sight of a bright, luminescent green RM at the far end of the corridor. Breathing in barely controlled gasps, he quelled an impulse to turn back, looked around and spotted an emergency storeroom containing generic, armored suits.

The suits afforded protection against most of the extremes found in space. The interior was composed of soft, pliant layers of fabric bonded at the molecular level with a silicon gel containing interlaced beryllium steel and lead alloy crystals. Any sudden impact and the gel hardened instantly around the beryllium crystals at the point of impact. The lead alloy crystals, compacted to double their normal density blocked radiation. An artificial sapphire sheath protected from temperature extremes. With its own power source, oxygen and body waste recycling systems, the suite would last for forty-eight hours of continuous use.

General Dynamic claimed the suits were self adjusting to the wearer. Alex knew that was a lie. The last time he had worn one the damn thing had rubbed a painful blister in a very awkward spot and caused a crotch rash that near drove him crazy because it couldn't be scratched.

The glowing green RM overrode comfort concerns. Dashing inside the storeroom, he hastily powered up one of the armored suits, opened the release clamps to unseal the fabric, stripped naked and began backing in.

"Any idea what the Sam Hell is going on?" A shaky voice asked. Glancing up, Alex saw another crewman had joined him. The yellow strip on his sleeve indicated Quartermaster. Above the left pocket was the name "Vagelli."

"ComCent said we were under attack." Alex turned to finish sealing the arm seams back on themselves. Locking the helmet into place, he was now fully enclosed. Using his chin, he touched the activation interface and felt the suit become flexible as power surged through the nano-engineered circuitry.

Peeling off his jumpsuit, Vagelli looked at Alex skeptically, then grumbled, "That's fucking crazy." He was backing into a hanging set of armor when a shock wave rippled through the storeroom, pitching him head long into a rack of helmets. He landed in a heap on the storeroom's metal decking.

The computer in Alex's suit sensed the danger and initiated the leg gyros to compensate, instead of falling, he swayed and rode the wave out. Recovering, Alex reached out an armored hand. Rubbing an angry, red welt on the side of his head, Vagelli took the hand and stood.

"Goddamn that hurt!"

"Quit whining. We at war and getting our ass kicked." Alex stated coldly. "What's your Battle Station assignment?"

"Ration Refrigeration and Storage." Vagelli answered as he finished getting into the protective armor.

"Screw that! You're now part of Damage Control Team Delta." Alex tossed him a helmet, then turned to exit the storeroom.

"Hey, I got my own..." Vagelli blurted indignantly.

"Quartermaster Second Class Vagelli, nobody gives a shit about frozen peas right now. I outrank you, putting me in charge." Alex leaned toward him, putting as much force into his voice as possible. "You're with me. Got it."

Eyes wide, Vagelli nodded. "Got it."

"Good." Alex patted the other man on the shoulder reassuringly Using the keyboard mounted on the suit's left forearm, he tried logging into the AI mainframe. Finding the way would be easier if he could pull up a Damage Control schematic indicating which areas of the ship were still clear.

"Goddamn it." Alex muttered acidly.

"What's wrong?" Vagelli's voice wavered.

"I can't get an uplink. AI must have retreated into its EMP shielded hard circuits."

"EMP?"

"Electromagnetic pulse." Alex responded, switching over to the radio frequency for the ComCent. "Means we getting hit with nukes outside. Every time one goes off it floods the area with an electron pulse that burns out the nano-circuitry. The AI is protecting itself from getting fried by using only lead sheathed fiber optics."

"Nukes! Ah, shit, we're so screwed." Vagelli whined. "What now?"

"We do it the hard way." Alex headed for the door. "Now come on, I'm not dying in this oversized closet."

Leaving the storeroom, Alex led. Servo-motor units inside the armor amplified the action, compensating for the suits weight, but running is still running and both were breathing heavily when they came to a distorted bulkhead bulging outward. Bright, silvery stress signatures in the steel radiated like a spidenveb from the closed hatch. A hapless ship's officer had been part way through when a shock wave slammed it shut.

Alex and Vagelli slowed their pell-mell run, stopping as they drew close to the body of a young woman with short black hair, dressed in the powder blue of an officer. Her left leg was missing below the knee, the bone, flesh and uniform severed neatly as if snipped by a pair of giant scissors. Blood pooled in a huge, irregular, crimson circle out from the limb. Laying face down against the metal deck, her dark hair glistened wetly in back, indicating where the hatch had crushed her skull when it slammed tight. Red lines streaked down the cheeks, forming a second, smaller blood puddle about the face. The impact of the hatch had tossed her ten feet.

Recovering first, Alex bent down and rolled the woman over, abstractly noticing a New Christian cross tattooed on her forehead, the name "Corinth" and the gold Ensign bars on her collar. He was sure the officer was dead, but felt the need to make sure.

"Check for vital signs. I'll try the bulkhead hatch."

Nodding, Vagelli knelt and used the suit sensors to scan for a pulse.

Straightening, Alex stepped over the woman and went to the hatch. Considering the damage, he doubted the control panel would function and reached for the manual "Tesdachi Zeta Class bombers. Bastards came out of nowhere. We've taken at least two nuclear hits and a bunch of near misses. ComCent says the whole fleet is getting shot to hell."

Alex nodded, trying to remember the profile of a Zeta class bomber. The effort must have been visible on his face.

"Forget Identification Friend or Foe signals." The Lieutenant instructed brusquely "Our fighters got nailed in their launch cradles on the lunar surface. If it's coming at us, kill it!"


Honorable Mention

The Darker Side of Dawn

By Michael Groetsch

It is 5:00 AM and I cautiously walk the streets of Baghdad. A half- crescent moon looms in the northern sky. In the far distance, a fireball gives off a bright orange glow as muffled explosions penetrate morning's silence. I am horrified to see a hooded body dangling from a steel girder. The pulsating sound of a military helicopter announces its approach. The scene is more surreal than I had imagined.

Although I have been forewarned that insurgents easily conceal themselves within pre-dawn shadows, my mission cannot be delayed. After much government red tape, I arrived in Iraq yesterday. I came here to find my son Gene. He is a United States Marine and has been reported missing in action. My wife and I are distraught. We can no longer sleep. I must find him before it's too late.

In a desperate effort to locate my son, I quickly walk the war-torn streets. A torched and mangled car sits near the entrance of an ancient mosque. I notice a charred corpse resting near the car's twisted metal. Although I have viewed such scenes on the evening news, I am not prepared for what I see. Video clips never disclose the reality of war.

Without warning, a group of hooded insurgents bolt from the far side of the temple. They hurl firebombs into a white-stone building while shooting automatic weapons into its fa9ade. I quickly fall to the street's mud- hardened groiund. The insurgents retreat as quickly as they emerged. Within seconds, silence returns and I rush into a building that has been partially reduced to rubble. I conceal myself within its remaining walls. My breathing becomes labored as my heart pounds against my chest. It is too dangerous to travel in darkness. I must wait until sunrise.

As I sit and wait for morning, images of Gene's childhood pass through my mind with lightening speed. My wife and I smile hi jubilation as the judge signs his adoption papers when he's three. I see him as a young boy being baptized in St. Benilde's Church. He flinches as the priest pours water across his naked brow. I smile as Gene dances with his first grade class at his school fair. My family sits and applauds as Ms high school principal awards him a diploma.

Suddenly, I hear heavy gunfire within yards of where I hide. An explosion shatters a nearby wall. I can no longer wait for daylight. Delaying my search is not an option. If I am to find my son, I must do it now.

I scurry through the pre-dawn darkness. My eyes scan the landscape in hopes that I might find Gene walking the embattled streets. I look to my right andl see the silhouette of a man dressed in military fatigues. At first I believe it is Gene. I discover that he is a Marine, but he looks nothing like my son.

It is nearly sunrise. I enter an open courtyard. People dressed in cloaks and scarves mingle with heavily armed American soldiers. I approach a young soldier who appears to be hi his teens. His deep- set eyes and distant expression reveal that he has witnessed horrors. I describe Gene and ask if he may have seen him. He shakes his head

but tells me that there is a MASH unit near the far side of the rectangular courtyard. He escorts me to the site. A car bomb explodes nearby. We quickly leave the danger of open spaces and use walls to shield us as we rush to our destination.

While the medical unit appears to be just another bombed-out building, it serves as a haven for soldiers injured hi combat. As the young soldier and I enter, personnel frantically treat men and women who lie on gurneys. While some appear superficially wounded, others scream in pain. A soldier to my left is missing a leg. Another is missing both arms. Those on the gurneys appear to be the lucky ones. Scattered near the walls of the makeshift hospital are body bags that contain the remains of soldiers who no longer require assistance.

We approach a nurse who seems to be taking a break from the nightmarish task of treating wounded and dying soldiers. I tell her that I am looking for my son. I explain that he is a United States Marine and was reported missing in action the day before Thanksgiving. I tell her that Gene is our life and that I can't return home until he is found.

With apprehension and empathetic eyes, the nurse directs me to a fresh group of body bags whose contents are new arrivals. She offers to open the bags so that I might view the soldiers inside. The thought of finding Gene this way terrifies me. The thought of never finding Gene terrifies me more.

The nurse seems apologetic as she approaches and opens the body bags. Each is numbered with a date of arrival and gender stenciled across its front. One by one, she unzips and then closes the light green colored bags as I hold my breath and glance inside.

As we approach body bag six, its rigid silhouette seems too familiar. I immediately try to dismiss my instinct as fatigue. I have been without sleep for over twenty-four hours and know how sleeplessness can weigh on the mind. Before I can address my apprehension, however, the nurse opens the bag and the finality of the moment overwhelms me. It is Gene. He is my third son. My mind's eye: again replays the past. I see him being baptized. I watch as he dances at his school fair. I applaud him at his graduation. He is the son I have always protected.

What will I tell my family? What will I tell my wife? What will I tell his friends? I touch Gene's forehead and rub my fingers across his face and lips. It appears as if he is sleeping. He seems to be at peace. What am I going to do? How will we go on? The trauma of seeing my son in a body bag makes me nauseated and weak. I become light­headed and feel faint. The voice of the nurse, as she tries to comfort me, seems muffled and distant. My legs give out and I fall to the cold stone floor.

The morning sun peers through the soft white curtains in our bedroom. The sound of someone walking down our staircase awakens me. It is Gene. I am not in Baghdad. He is not dead. As he does each day, he is preparing for work. My cheeks are wet with tears. As I gather my thoughts, I realize that I've been crying in my sleep. I've had a bad dream.

I never share such nightmares with my wife. I don’t want to upset her with such dark dreams. In an effort to conceal my distress, I quickly rise from bed and shower. How can I grieve for a son who is safe at home? After all, he is not in Iraq. How can I grieve over something that has not taken place? Perhaps my dream has made me more aware of the possibilities. The rush of water across my head and shoulders does not dismiss my pain. I cry silently before I leave the shower.

As I sit and eat breakfast, I read the newspaper that someone left on the kitchen table. I scan the first section in hopes of being reassured that the war in Iraq is not as horrific as I fear. The headlines and photographs disagree. Bold print lists three- thousand American troops dead since the onset of the war. The picture of a young military amputee, no older than Gene, stares grimly from the pages. Another photograph shows a body bag being placed into a military helicopter. Other headlines reveal an endless series of suicide bombings, deadly ambushes, and hostages reduced to headless corpses.

Although the sound of my wife telling Gene goodbye before he leaves for work is soothing, the reality of my sleepless night becomes apparent. Thousands of families across America live my nightmare. They are terrified by the fear of loss. They anguish over their inability to protect their sons and daughters from a monster that stalks them. The less fortunate grieve as their children are shipped in body bags and caskets that bear the ultimate markings of war.

I get dressed and kiss my wife before I leave for the office. As I drive away in a light rain, I notice a green military cargo plane flying towards nearby Belle Chasse Air Force Base. I can only wonder its content. I detour briefly so that I may pass my son's job site. His car sits in the driveway. For the moment, I am reassured.

"MORE THAN AN END TO WAR, WE WANT AN END TO THE BEGINNINGS OF WAR." — Franklin D. Roosevelt


Honorable Mention

Icicles in California

By Dallas Woodburn

We go to the movies. Jake drives me home. Tufts of hair flop over his eyes and he pushes them to the side, swiping them across his forehead absentmindedly as he talks. I like him. He's the kind of person who sings along to the radio and quotes random movie lines from the '80s and covers his mouth when he yawns.

"Turn right here," 1 say. "My house is that big brown one. With the Charlie Brown Christmas lights." My dad hangs the multicolored bulbs in awkward looping strands across the front of our house. I think it looks homey and charming, like a child's crayon drawing on the back of a Kid's Menu. Mom thinks it looks ridiculous. She wants the straight, even rows of white icicle lights that adorn all the other houses in our neighborhood - which is ironic, as those lights are the most ridiculous of all. We live in California.

Jake turns into my cul-de-sac and stops in front of my house, grinning at the lights. I like that he doesn't need to ask for further clarification. He understands my sense of humor.

"Hey, my friend's having a party tonight," he says. He puts the car into park but doesn't cut the engine. "Do you wanna come?"

"Yeah, okay. That'll be fun."

"Okay. I'll pick you up at nine."

"Okay."

* * *

I have a slight head-ache and I'm over-dressed. Jake is half an hour later than he said he would be, wearing shorts and a hooded sweatshirt. I'm wearing pointy shoes that suddenly seem as out of place as icicles in California. Jeans are okay, though. And at least my black lacy top shows off my cleavage.

Jake's friend is Eric, a short guy with greasy hair but a nice smile that extends to his eyes. "Jake-Man!" he says, clapping Jake on the back while I stand clumsily behind, in the shadows. Jake follows Eric in, pulling me gently along, his fingers warm on my wrist. "Hey everyone, this is Stacey," he says once we're inside. I was expecting a dark, crowded room, thumping bass music, dancing, cheap beer sloshing in red plastic cups, but it seems "everyone" is just Eric and Eric's girlfriend, whose name I promptly forget. I'm already mentally analyzing Jake's introduction of me, searching for clues. This is Stacey, he said. Not, This is my friend, Stacey. It must mean something. If he only thinks of me as a friend, he would make it clear. To everyone. Right?

Eric shakes my hand; his girlfriend nods and smiles without showing her teeth. The walls look freshly painted and the windows are curtainless and half-a-dozen cardboard boxes are congregating in the far comer. "Sorry about the mess," Eric says. "We just moved in," His girlfriend gives me the tour: the queen-size bed filling nearly all of the bedroom, the cramped bathroom with combination shower/tub, the kitchen/dining room opening up into a narrow living room with blue carpet and a faded fold-out couch. Wine glasses sit on coasters on the floor because, Eric's girlfriend explains, "We can't splurge on a coffee table yet." The coasters make me smile.

"This is great," I say.

"Yeah, it's small, but it's ours." Her cheeks are flushed and her eyes shine. I imagine her vacuuming the carpet, hanging flowered curtains in the windows, baking casseroles in the oven. Playing house. It reminds me of the photographs I found tucked away in our garage beside boxes of vinyl albums and old basketball trophies - snapshots of my parents, newlyweds right out of college, filling a tiny apartment with used furniture and unabashed love. In the pictures, they look young and tanned and happy.

I feel like a child, suddenly; overwhelmed, out of place in my trying-too-hard pointy shoes and awkward innocence. Eric offers us wine and I gladly take a glass, clutching its stem, swirling the deep red liquid and yearning for sophistication. Four years older. Jake is four years older than I am, and while back in high school it seemed like a wide chasm yawned between us, as we've grown older the distance has gradually shrank and shrank, until I returned home from college for winter break and found it was merely a thin trace of a crack that I stepped across, unblinking.

Now, however, I can feel the earth beneath us shifting, splitting open, the crack expanding. Four years older. I'm still eating dorm food and spending Saturday nights at keg parties, trying to figure out what to do with my life. Meanwhile, Jake's moved across the country and on to graduate school, responsibilities, the Real World. Blue carpet and casseroles and wine glasses on coasters. Is this what he wants? Because we both know it's not something I can give, not yet.

"So, Eric, where's the party?" Jake says, nudging his friend in the ribs. Eric holds his hands up in surrender. "Danny and Jody said they'd show up, and Rach told me she'd be here an hour ago, but you know her. Phil's on his way, too."

"Phil Eckerman! Man, I haven't seen that guy in years. Is he really coming?'

"Supposedly. He said he'd call if he got lost."

Jake laughs, plops down on the couch. I'm still standing by the window with Eric's girlfriend. Our attempt at small talk has faded away. She addresses the guys: "Remember when Phil was, like, half an hour late to your place before Prom -

"Because they painted the house on Foothill where he was supposed to turn!" Eric says, laughing. "He knew to turn left at a yellow house, but now the house was brown, so he drove right on by. Oh man! That was classic."

Jake meets my eyes, rests his arm on the back of the couch. He smiles at me. I don't know if that's an invitation but I take it as one, leaving the curtainless window to sit beside him, our thighs gently touching. Jake leans in towards me. "Phil has a terrible sense of direction," he explains. As if I hadn't figured that out. Still, I'm grateful he's attempting to make me feel a part of the conversation.

The doorbell rings. Danny and Jody. "This is Stacey," Jake introduces. We smile, nod, shake hands. Later, Rachel arrives; last of all, Phil. "Jeez, this place is hard to find!" he says. Everyone laughs. Jake winks at me.

Rachel is built like Tinkerbell, small and sprightly, and she's wearing pink tights and leg warmers and an oversize cable-knit sweater. "I'm playing at winter," she explains. I like her immediately. She gives me a hug instead of a handshake and, after grabbing a Diet Coke from the fridge, sits down beside me on the couch. "You should have seen this guy in high school," she tells me, gesturing at Jake. "Braces, cowlick, scrawny and gangly as a baby giraffe."

I laugh; Jake shakes his head. "God, Rach, why are you spreading lies?" He puts his hand on my knee. "Don't listen to her," he says. "She's still mad I got a better grade in Mr. Russell's bio class."

"Shut it, Jake! I knew you'd bring that up." She takes out her cell phone, flips it open. "He always brings that up," she says to me. "Probably because it's the only class he got a better grade in!"

"Ouch," Jake laughs.

"It's true," Rachel says. She closes her phone. "Damn! I was hoping I'd have an old picture of you in my phone, Jake, but I don't."

"Phew!" Jake wipes mock sweat off his brow and grins at me. "Stacey won't see what a nerd I used to be and run for the hills."

"You're still a nerd!" Rachel says.

"Well, I'm not running anywhere," I put in. The room is warm and I can feel the wine, settling under my ribs, relaxing my smile. My headache is nearly gone.

The conversation turns back to old high school memories and stays there. I feel like an outsider, but I don't really mind. The stories, most of them, are amusing. I settle back into the couch and listen and laugh along with the others. I like them; even Eric's girlfriend is smiling fully now, showing her teeth. They talk loudly and interrupt each other and slap their thighs with their palms when they laugh. They remind me of my friends, except instead of talking about their majors they talk about their jobs. God, jobs. Actual nine-to-five jobs. The chasm threatens to buckle and widen, but Jake's hand is on my knee. There are icicles in California. I can feel my toes, perched on the brink of the cliff, but I don't look down.

* * *

Driving home. Jake sings along to some late '80s song I've never head of. "Ur-gent! It's ur-gent!" he sings. "How have you never heard this song? I guess it was popular before your time." It's exactly what my mom says when she listens to Tom Petty or The Who.

We pull into my cul-de-sac. The Charlie Brown lights blink red and green and blue. Jake parks the car, turns off the engine. He yawns, covering his mouth with his hand. I want to kiss him so badly my throat aches.

"Thanks for putting up with my friends," he says.

"Don't say that," I laugh. "It was fun. I had a great time. I like your friends."

"Well, they liked you, too," he says. He leans closer. There are flecks of amber in his irises. His kiss tastes like red wine, no coasters on blue carpet required.

* * *

In two weeks, Jake will fly back to grad school in Florida. I will go back to my dorm food and weekend keg parties. All the Christmas lights will come down. But, for now, the neighborhood is ablaze with icicles.

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