2007 "Let's Write" Literary Contest Nonfiction Winners

 

First Place

Johnteen

By Michael Groetsch

NOVEMBER 2001

It is the fall of 2001. There is a faint chill in the evening air. My wife Barbara sit quietly as I drive into the large parking complex of East Jefferson Hospital. People scurrying back and forth in blue scrub suits and white lab coats suggests that the shift is changing. The staff leaving for the day seems anxious to get home to their families. The staff arriving seems anxious not to be late for patients who await their care.

Entering the main door of the hospital's massive lobby, its extravagant design appears inappropriate for the pain found inside its walls. Such luxury provides no relief to the suffering. Perhaps it is meant for those who visit. Perhaps the decor is for those who grieve. As I walk through the hospital's long corridor, mechanized voices emerge from the intercom with tones of urgency. The solemn eyes of those who sit in a large waiting room reach out to mine, but quickly withdraw into silent thought.

Barbara and I approach a patient information desk to the pleasant welcome of an aging man. The gray-haired clerk wears a volunteer name -tag below the left pocket of his starched white shirt. I ask for my mother's room number and his prompt reply that she is in T-2 suggests that other family members have already arrived.

As we exit the elevator on the second floor and approach room T-2, we immediately hear the sound of my father's voice. We enter Mom's room to the cautious smiles of my sisters, brothers, nephews, and aunts. She is scheduled for surgery in less then three hours. Mom has cancer. I find it so very difficult to say the word.

Dad sits nervously on the edge of Mom's hospital bed. Almost like a child clinging to his mother, he caresses her left arm with gentle hands. Although she appears upbeat, her eyes express concern. Surgery is to take two to three hours. We are hopeful that things will go well, but the thought of losing her is daunting. I glance at the clock that hangs on the bare wall. It is 3:30PM. I look again and it is only 3:34. Seconds seem like minutes, minutes like hours. Mom is to be taken into surgery at 5:45PM. Time seems to move so slowly when anticipating such events.

At 5:40PM, a young man with dark hair and kind eyes enters the small room. He has come to transport Mom to surgery. He seems instinctively aware of our distress and concern. Like his eyes, his demeanor is soft and warm. His voice serves as an antidote to the anxiety we feel. After receiving Mom's assurance that she is ready, he carefully guides her hospital gurney out of T-2 to the loud whispers of our silent prayers. I notice my brother's eyes and cheeks are red. He has been crying in an adjoining room. Most of my family cries in private. I often cry alone, so that I don't intrude on others.

We gather in the spacious area of the hospital where those in waiting measure time in microseconds. On my left is a large screen television that no one watches. Its muffled sound serves as a placebo, like the white noise of a ceiling fan. On my right is Dad. He drifts deep into thoughts that only husbands or wives have at times like this. In an attempt to separate myself from the uncertainty of the moment, I allow my mind to drift into pleasant memories of my childhood.

As I retreat into the past, my mind's eye projects bright images that encompass the spectrum of the rainbow. Although I dream in black and white, I recall my childhood in vivid color. I see Mom spraying my tiny worn out penny loafers a bright shiny red. They are as bright as the candy apples that she gets me when we go to the circus. They are as red as the fire truck with the bell and ladders that she got me for Christmas. She makes such a fuss over my shoes that I feel good inside. Although it is difficult to explain the significance of those tiny red shoes, they were the earliest memory that I possess of life around me, and I am blessed to have shared it with my mother.

I shut my eyes and continue the search for more of my past. I see Mom placing the shiny silver and gold stars on grammar school papers of which I am so proud. She places a star above all of my A's and B's and tells me what a wonderful job I did. She gives me a kiss and another special star, one that is ocean blue. I never told her that for years, I kept the papers with the glittering stars hidden away in a secret place. I would always look at them whenever I wanted to feel reassured. I only wish that I could find my shiny stars this night. I always associate bright colors and pleasant experiences of my childhood with my mother. I see her attaching deep blue and sapphire green reflectors made of cut glass onto my homemade skateboard. I sit and watch her plant dark- red poinsettias, with green-red centers, in her little garden in front of our home. On yesterday's Halloween, she carves a smiling face on a large orange pumpkin and lets me pull the seeds from its belly with my small hands. I help her wash our new canary- yellow Buick convertible. Its heavy metal grillwork resembles an exposed steam heater in an old office building. Although I don't fully understand why I associate bright colors with my early life with my mother, such reflections seem to rescue me from moments of darkness. But this is not a time to be analytical. It is a time to visit my past so that I may endure the present.

As I continue my search for other treasured memories, I hear the echo of Mom's voice from another distant time. I see her as a twenty-eight year old woman. A young woman with soft blonde hair and fair skin who brings ice cream to eat and comic books to read as I recover from tonsil surgery. She reminds me of a beautiful actress I saw in a late night movie. Her name, Johnteen, is the prettiest name I've ever heard; prettier than all of the colors of the rainbow; prettier than a dark- red poinsettia with it's green-red center.

My private reflections of life with my mother are interrupted by the nervous stirrings of my father. It is now 8:45 in the evening. It has been nearly three hours since she has been taken to surgery. Dad is beginning to worry that they are taking so long. He begins to question why no one comes with a progress report on her condition. With hands in both pockets, he paces up and down the waiting area's wide corridor. Although he doesn't sob on the outside, I know that he cries within his soul. After my aunt and sister reassure him that it is still too early to anticipate word on Mom's progress, he settles back into his chair and escapes into the empty sound of the big screen television.

Treasured memories of my mother always merge with those of my father. My mind blinks to the sight of Dad coming into the bedroom in which I sleep. I am five- years- old and always lie in Mom's bed on Thursday nights when he goes bowling. I don't know why, but their bed always seems warmer than my own. As Dad lifts and carries me to my own bedroom, he hugs my body as I pretend to sleep. I want to feel his touch as he tucks me into my bed. I want to feel him kiss my cheek as he arranges the pillow beneath my head. Such kisses are so much better when he thinks that I am sleeping.

As I struggle to evade the stress of Mom's vigil, my mind continues to meander into my past with Dad. I am ten- years- old and sit on the porch of our home. I watch him load trucks in a pouring rain. He is the shipping clerk for our family business. His company faces the front of our house. School is out for the summer and I sit on the porch in eager anticipation of bringing him lunch. Mom lets me bring Dad his sandwich and chocolate bar that she stuffed in a brown paper bag. He shares his lunch with a white pigeon that always seems to know the hour of the day. Dad goes to work at 6:00 in the morning and doesn't return until sunset. His twelve-hour workdays are his way of telling us how much we mean to him.

In yet another image of Dad, I am fifteen-years-old. He sits quietly at his desk in our spacious new home and pays the family bills so that we don't have to worry. I am old enough now to realize how much he has done for us. A blue- collar worker who made our lives comfortable through sweat and workdays that often extended into the night. Dad has provided us with a life frequently taken for granted. I am proud that he is my father. Perhaps I need to tell him so.

It is 9:33 in the evening. My welcomed flashbacks are broken by the sudden approach of my mother's surgeon. Dad jumps from his chair and rushes towards the doctor. As he questions the surgeon concerning her condition, my heart seems to momentarily stop as we await a reply. Like the young man who escorted Mom to surgery, the doctor has dark hair, kind eyes and a bedside manner that is soft and warm. As the surgeon speaks and makes eye contact with Dad, she appears cautiously optimistic. She explains that most of the cancer has been removed and that Mom has been placed in the recovery room. Dad presses the doctor for absolute assurance that Mom will be okay. She responds by saying that while the cancer is advanced, her post-operative condition is favorable. She further explains that chemotherapy should eliminate what could not be removed in surgery. For the first time since early evening, I notice that my father is smiling.

It is 10:30PM. We enter the area where my mother is recovering. Tubes and an oxygen mask are attached to her body like the tentacles of an octopus. Her breathing is labored and she appears in distress. My heart quivers until a nurse enters and reassures us that her condition is stable. I only wish that I could bring Mom ice cream and comic books to relieve her pain. I only wish that I could find my bright shiny stars and stick them on the medical chart that hangs above her bed.

OCTOBER 2002

Although Mom has done relatively well since surgery eleven months ago, she recently suffered a series of setbacks. For the third time in less then three months, she has been readmitted into East Jefferson Hospital with a high fever. Chemotherapy has ravaged her body and spirit. Although she tries to remain upbeat for us, her face cannot conceal her pain.

My wife and I enter the elevator to the whispers of another couple discussing the plight of their own mother. She is also hospitalized with cancer. Although I feel like holding both of them, I remain empathetically silent as they exit in tears. Once again, we enter the fifth floor to visit my mother. We are not certain that she will see tomorrow.

At 8:30 P.M., as our family sits near Mom's bedside, her face becomes swollen and bright red. She begins shaking violently and whimpers with pain. My sister Jeanne and I rush to the nursing desk to alert the staff of the crisis. A clerk filling out medical charts tells us they are short staffed but will immediately call for a nurse.

Fifteen minutes pass and she still shivers and moans. We nervously wait for someone to assist us. The sheets on her bed are drenched with sweat. I feel my heart pounding in my chest. I am terrified that she may die before anyone arrives. In a desperate attempt to address her pain, Dad climbs in bed and embraces Mom's body.

At 8:50 P.M., a tall nurse with silver-white hair enters the room. She apologizes for the delay. She explains that employee reductions have left her almost helpless in responding quickly to such situations. After addressing her immediate needs, the nurse tells us that Mom is scheduled to take her medications at 9:00 P.M. She assures us that she will return momentarily. Mom's fever is dangerously high.

It is 9:20 P.M. but no one has arrived. She begins to shake so violently that her bed vibrates in rhythm. Dad continues to cradle her. Once again, Jeanne and I rush to the nursing station seeking assistance. As before, we are informed that personnel shortages have caused them to be behind schedule. We are told they are doing their best.

We return to Mom's room, but I station myself in front of her door hoping to find someone who can help. I see a nurse at the far end of the long empty corridor and approach her with a tone of urgency. She tells me that she must first take care of a patient whose medications were due an hour ago.

At 9:50 P.M., the nurse that I met in the hallway hurriedly enters the room. She rummages through my mother's medical chart to determine which medications are due. Like the other nurses on the floor this night, she is polite, but stressed. After giving Mom an I.V., she takes her temperature. Dad watches and reads the numbers as they rise on the thermometer. Her temperature has risen to 104.3.1 silently pray that it will stop. The nurse explains they cannot monitor patients as often as they should. She offers to leave the thermometer with us. We agree. I wonder about patients whose families are not close by. I dismiss the thought. The possibilities are frightening.

It is almost midnight. Mom's current crisis is over. Her fever has passed. She no longer shivers. She appears exhausted but speaks hi a manner that provides us with temporary relief. With the reassurance that Dad and Jeanne will stay with her for the remainder of the night, I kiss Mom's forehead to let her know that I love her. My wife and I leave for the evening so we can face the next day.

Within three days of Mom's hospitalization, we are present as the doctor releases her to go home. She is to resume chemotherapy within a week. As a nurse's assistant helps her into a wheelchair, I notice Dad making 'the sign of the cross' with his fingertips. The same hand movements that he makes each time he passes hi front of a Catholic Church; a symbol that reveres a higher power.

After arriving at Dad's car, the attendant lifts Mom into its back seat. As a light rain falls, Dad drives from the parking garage towards a home they have missed, the home where we were raised as children.

NOVEMBER 2002

It is 6:30 on Saturday morning. The piercing sound of the bedroom phone awakens me. It is my father. His voice is stressed. He tells me that Mom relapsed in the middle of the night. She is in the ICU at the hospital with a high fever. Dad tells me that she is only semi-conscious. His words are those of worry.

I quickly shower, dress, kiss my wife, and rush to my car. Barbara tells me that she will meet me in an hour. As I speed towards the hospital, my mind wanders to places I don't want to go. I feel emotionally numb by the thought of losing my mother. Once again, I cry in private as I drive into the hospital's garage.

I easily navigate the corridors that once confused me. The meandering hallways of the hospital have become too familiar. As I enter a crowded elevator, I now find myself avoiding eye contact with the people inside. I don't want to see their pain. Grief is not unique. It only appears to be when it is your own.

I enter the waiting area to the sight of Dad sitting alone in the corner of the room. He stares blankly at the early morning news. My brothers and sisters have not yet arrived. I want to hug Dad, but inhibitions restrict my movements. Although he informs me that visiting hours are over until 10:30 A.M., I cannot bear the thought of losing Mom without saying goodbye.

I enter the ICU and plead with the nurse to let me see my mother. She hesitates, but reads my eyes and asks that I be brief. Thanking the nurse for her kindness, I hurriedly walk into Mom's room. Although she breathes through an oxygen mask and cannot speak, she seems to welcome me with a warm expression. I speak the words " I love you." I tell her that I hope I've been a good son. As my eyes moisten, tears run down the sides of her flush face. I realize, until now, I have never seen my mother cry.

It is now 10:00 P.M. We have been here for nearly fourteen hours. Mom received a transfusion and has miraculously recovered from a near death experience. Her fever is gone and she is, for the moment, out of danger. Her legs, however, remain red and swollen. Dad massages her feet with cream and tells her that she is his baby.

Our entire family holds vigil around Mom's bed and tries to remain positive. Barbara tells my mother how young her hands look as she proudly holds them up for all to see. My brother, Barry, reflects on a funny story about our childhood. My sister, Brenda, comments on her beautiful ocean blue eyes; eyes highlighted by a hairless scalp; eyes as beautiful as her name; eyes prettier than the bright red poinsettias she once planted in her garden; eyes that watched over us as children.

By Tuesday evening, we take a deep breath knowing that once again, she is coming home. We are aware, however, that this is a process that could end tomorrow; that additional time with her could be brief. Denial has become our friend. It whispers untruths so that we can face another day.

DECEMBER 2002

It is a chilly Christmas Eve. A cloudless sky reveals the beauty of bright twinkling stars. My wife and I travel towards our family's Christmas party hi anticipation of seeing my mother. The thought that she will celebrate Christmas with us overwhelms me. I pray that it will not be her last.

We enter the party to a flurry of children who eagerly await the arrival of Santa Claus. Mom sits in the center of the den surrounded by my brothers, sisters, aunts, uncles, cousins, nieces, nephews and friends. Dad sits by her side and openly displays his love. Mom is wearing a pretty red dress that brightens the room, a dress that reflects the colorful memories of my childhood.

It has been thirteen months since she had surgery. Her courage over the last year has been remarkable. Her will to survive so that she may continue to share her life with us is heroic. As a tribute to her spirit, I present her with a red poinsettia in a vase covered with shinny gold paper. The paper shimmers like the gold stars that she once gave me as a child. I whisper that I love her and I am proud she is my mother.

Within an hour, my cousin Kevin arrives at the party. He is dressed as Santa and is ambushed by anxious children. It occurs to me how quickly the years have passed. My memory recalls a scene in which Kevin's father played Santa at our Christmas party when I was a child. I still recall the anticipation of receiving my gift. It was a gift that came from Mom's heart. It was a gift that came from Dad's twelve-hour workdays. On this night, however, the greatest gift I receive is Mom with her glowing smile. I don't want this night to end. I don't want this to be her last Christmas.

For the remainder of the night, we eat, drink, and tell stories of Christmas' past; stories that lay buried within our hearts; stories of precious moments that we have shared together; stories of love. Even within the absence of words, we let one another know how much we care. We hug and kiss, laugh and cry, and share glances that reaffirm our oneness. And then the night is over.

JANURARY 2003

We gather in the waiting area of the ICU. Mom is critically ill. Her kidneys are now poisoning her body. She has requested that she not be attached to a dialysis machine. It is apparent she is prepared to enter the tunnel that will terminate her pain. She has suffered so much. It would be cruel to go against her wishes and attach her to wires and tubes that will prolong her agony.

As hi the past, in small groups, we enter the ICU to say our good-byes. While I stand by her bedside, once again, I reflect on images of my past. I suddenly see Mom standing over my hospital bed feeding me ice cream to soothe my pain. I see her placing Dad's sandwich and chocolate bar into a brown paper bag before he leaves for work. I see her changing the bandage on my older brother's arm following an accident hi which he fell. I see her hugging my younger brother as he wins the race at the annual picnic. I see her giving my little sister medicine that will reduce her fever. I see her cuddling my youngest sister shortly after she was born. Mom was always our caretaker. Now we are hers. It seems so strange how roles become reversed.

Dad holds a straw to Mom's lips in an effort to quench her dry throat. He gently strokes her forehead and face with his right hand. He reminds her how much she is loved. He tells her that she is his baby. He tells her how he would like to take her home so that she could sit in her favorite chair. I momentarily retreat from the room in an effort to regain my composure.

It is 8:30 PM. The visiting hours in the ICU are over. During the course of the day, an endless stream of family members have come and gone. My sisters are weary. The hours they spend at the hospital are excessive. Recognizing their fatigue, I suggest that they go home to rest. I offer to spend the night.

Dad refuses to leave Mom's side. He knows that the end is very near. He knows that the woman who has given him five children, his wife of 59 years, is about to leave this life until they are rejoined in the next. Jeanne, Brenda, and the rest of my family go home for the evening. Brenda kisses Mom's forehead and tells her that she will return in the morning.

Following everyone's departure, the waiting area and surrounding corridor become quiet and still. Dad stays in the room with Mom while I try to sleep in the lobby. The blend of distant voices coming from a television, the hospital intercom and staff members walking the hallways provides me with the comfort that I am not alone. I slowly fall into a twilight sleep.

At 1:00 AM, the sound of a hallway door closing stirs me from my restless sleep. Knowing that the nurses have given us permission to come and go as we please, I get up and walk into the ICU to check on Mom. As I approach the door of the small room where she lies, I see Dad standing near her bedside. He is sobbing. Without intruding on his private moment, I retreat into the lobby and cry until sleep comforts me.

At 3:30 AM, I am wakened by muffled voices coming from the corridor. I quickly rise and re-enter the ICU to see if Mom is okay. Two nurses reviewing a patient chart smile empathetically. I enter the small cubicle hi which Mom and Dad sleep to reassure myself that she is still breathing. Although I know that we need to let her go to the other side, the thought of her leaving us terrifies me. It seems so odd how life repeats itself. It was only yesterday that my parents opened our doors to see if we were okay. Now we open theirs. Dad sleeps in a fetal position on the floor in the corner of the room. He has not left her side for a week. I cannot comprehend his pain.

JANURARY15.2003

Although Mom is slipping further away, she has survived the night. She has been transferred to the floor where patients go to die. All machines and substances that would prolong her life and suffering have been withdrawn. She is being allowed to enter the tunnel; the tunnel that will transport her into the arms of loved ones that wait on the other side.

Dad stands over her bed and sobs. He tells Mom that he would give all his wealth to spend just one more day with her. Dad strokes her hair. He caresses her face. He kisses her lips. Dad tells Mom how much he loves her and says good-bye. It is then that she begins to enter the tunnel. It is then that she begins to travel to the other side.

Suddenly, Johnteen begins to hear a familiar voice in the near distance. "Michael is right, you do have one of the most beautiful names that I have ever heard. I should know. I am the one who gave it to you."

As Johnteen looks up, her mother Eva, who passed before her, extends her hands and lifts her from the other side of the tunnel. And then there is light.

"Welcome home, Johnteen. I've missed you so. What a beautiful name."


Third Place

Old Maid Circa 2007

By Gerry L. Cofield

I found myself in a small country church staring at a broad-shouldered rugged male specimen, wondering if he was single. After the service his teenage son appeared and a henpecking wife wasn't far behind. This is what it's come to- scoping out middle-aged farmers.. ..lusting after someone's dad while the fire and brimstone is stoked.

A little over a year ago I left the bustling city of Atlanta for rural Alabama. A benefit of leaving was breaking away from the "boyfriend" who had happened into my life. "Boyfriend" is a silly term for people over the age of 18- he's not technically a boy, and the relationship isn't exactly that of friends. We were admittedly all wrong for each other. Strangely, we refused to do anything about it. Maybe it was comfortable, maybe we were just lazy, maybe my credit was good and he didn't complain about my weight.

I've experienced various other relationships, but they were also less than ideal. I even dated the "perfect" guy. He was nice, handsome, had a good job and a decent family. Yawn…. I was bored.

Match.com proved to be a colossal disappointment. How can you seem so compatible in emails and phone conversations to be so completely incompatible in person? One example: online- nice guy, educated, good job, funny, relatively intelligent, and attractive. I spent 2 hours perfectly fluffing my mane, selecting the absolute best black pantsuit, applying make-up thicker than an auto paint job, and dabbing on trendy overpriced perfume. He showed up at my house in a t-shirt that said "big daddy" and picked his teeth with a sugar packet at the table. I was still trying to be open-minded when he put the sugar packet back into the sweetener caddy. It wasn't a match.

So here I am, single at 33 and doing just fine. But many people seem to find this strange and want to "fix" it. They think I'm missing something, bless my clueless heart.

I get a lot of suggestions. "Don't be so independent." "Meet men at church." "Ask guys out." "Dress up and wear makeup more often." "Smile and laugh more." "Don't be so smart." "Don't be so cynical." "Don't be so sarcastic." Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the concern. But they probably want me to "always be myself like it says in my high school yearbook, too. How long am I supposed to do all those things? Until I get him to propose? Until our wedding night? Until the first anniversary? Then what will change about him? Someone may have had some suggestions for him too, you know.

People ask, "What type of man are you looking for?" Well, if I knew for certain, chances are I'd have him by now. The best I can do is to tell them I want someone like Shawn Mullins. Then I either sound like a stalker or I confuse those who are unaware of this god of music. He seems like the perfect combination- peaceful, kind, intelligent, well-read, well-traveled, sexy, laid-back, talented, passionate, the kind of guy who can befriend anyone, nonjudgmental, earthy, loves animals and children, appreciates the wisdom of old people... I could go on. But thanks to fate and his lovely wife Kelly, I must look elsewhere.

The upside is my biological clock isn't ticking so loudly. It's been drowned out by the fits of 2-year-olds every time I visit the grocery store. Besides, I have 2 dogs and a cat to qualify as my children. They usurp almost as much time, energy, and income as actual human offspring. And if I loved anything more than them, it may just be too painful. I'm not saying I'm completely opposed to the idea of having children (see, I'm flexible-someone suggested that).

A recently divorced, and somewhat bitter, male friend suggested I forget an actual relationship and find a "bed buddy". I tried explaining that, for a female living in the same small community as her doting father, this is not a viable option. Although it sounds fun, I'm a little too evolved for that arrangement and it usually doesn't end well.

So, I've lost some weight now. I walk everyday, with my dogs and an aunt whose advice I try to accept with an open mind. I've filled my wardrobe with lovely girlie items and enjoy frequent pedicures. My hair is freshly cut and colored and a fresh makeup palette almost covers the bathroom countertop.

I'm still independent, because I've earned this one honestly. But, I will let a man open a door or carry something heavy without making a scene. I smile and laugh as much as is possible without making people nervous. I'm trying to curb the cynicism because I want to be more positive, but I'm still sarcastic because it's part of my personal charm. If there are men to meet at church, I'll meet them- but I still won't ask them out. I'm just not comfortable being the "asker". And, I don't know if I'm "being" smart or am smart, but that just doesn't seem like a bad thing. Therefore, I'm trying to become smarter- I've increased my magazine subscriptions, started online classes, and take a more active role in politics. So, here it is guys, the sort of new and somewhat improved me. Take me or leave me, I'll be just fine.


Honorable Mention

Small Katrina Miracles

By Brenda Finnegan

When Hurricane Katrina washed away our home, our rental house, a small guesthouse, my car, and my husband's truck on Belle Fontaine Beach in Ocean Springs on August 29, 2005, we lost everything we owned except what we had taken when we evacuated.

For over a year, we have searched through the debris across the road, and in the 20" of sand left on top of the slab that was once the cottage we lived in, for anything of sentimental value.

Some items were found on top of the ground in our neighbor’s yard to the west. Some we have dug up. Our property has looked like an archaeological dig, with shovels and carts for removing sand, and sieves, spoons and hand rakes and shovels.

There are a few miracles that we have realized throughout this time. Most of them happened on the tidal-swept beach lot. Some happened elsewhere. Here are some of the most meaningful

Mother's Quilt

Among the many items I grieved over, as I walked through the debris that was our home and belongings was my mother's quilt. The quilt was a gift to her from the family on her 75th birthday on August 20, 1994.

Each of her four sons and four daughters created his or her own square, sometimes with the help or input from spouses. My older brother was a retired postal worker and his square included a rural mailbox with his name and "#1 Son" on it. Each one of the others was just as personal.

There were twenty-two squares around the perimeter for the twenty-two grandchildren. The seven great-grandchildren had their hands traced onto their squares with their names. An extra square was added with "invisible" quilted handprints for future "babies." Mother's square was a big "75;" Daddy's (who passed away in 1981) was his CB handle, "Nickel Nose," cut from a denim shirt I had embroidered for him. Two more squares had a fish and a cabin for our fish camp in Gautier, where we spent every summer, swimming in the Pascagoula River.

The quilt became mine when Mother passed away in 2004, and was in our home that washed away.

For weeks I walked the woods, looking mostly in the trees where most of our clothing and linens hung. One day, about seven weeks after the storm, I stumbled over something pink wrapped around a wild grapevine. With shaking hands, I began to unwrap it, believing it would be shredded like most of the comforters I had found. Unbelievably it was intact! Though dirty, and with a couple of small tears, it was in good shape! A small miracle!

The Dog Tags

For several months, my husband and I dug in the sand left over our slab, mostly alone. We did have a few family members come, but after the first of the year, several groups came and gave us a hand. What a blessing they were!

One group was from Harvard University. I believe they were divinity students. One was a young beautiful, happy African-American woman named Rejoice! Her name fit her

perfectly.

While digging in the sand, she unearthed a small rectangular piece of metal. Not knowing what it was, she called to me. I looked and was astounded. It was one of my husband's two dog tags from his service in the U.S. Air Force from 1959-1963. My husband, also nearby, was so thrilled to have it.

He said that his dog tags had been left in a jewelry box on top of a dresser in the bathroom. (Never dreaming that our house would be washed away, we left most of our jewelry in the house when we evacuated.)

We all stopped to rejoice in the moment, and I took a photograph of Rejoice and my beaming husband. About thirty minutes later, Rejoice unearthed the second one! My husband was so thrilled to find the dog tags he believed he would never see again!

The lady who bought it was not Catholic, and passed it along to her friend, who was. Her friend, who was a friend of my aunt's, recognized my name, and knowing I was her niece, passed the Bible along to my aunt, who placed it into my hands.

So, a twenty-two year old Bible, with our names inside, found its way back to us after we lost our own.

A Large Wooden Cross

When I retired from my fourteen years as an elementary school secretary in a parochial school, the staff gave me a truly unique gift, a large artist-designed wooden cross, about two feet wide by three feet long. The cross was in three layers. The first was a simple unpainted cross, whose wood had come from one of the old parish buildings. On top of that was a whitewashed Celtic-type wooden cross with an unpainted wooden fish in the center of it.

There were beautiful cobalt blue tiles in a pattern at each end and seashells at the end of each crosspiece. "Pearls" adorned the shells and the eye of the fish, made from old jewelry the staff gave to the artist to be melted into "pearls."

For eight years, it hung proudly in our hallway (one of the only places large enough for it in our little seaside cottage). When Katrina hit, it was lost as our house dissolved like a sandcastle on the beach in the tidal surge, estimated to be about thirty feet high.

We spent a good many weeks searching the woods for anything that was salvageable. One day, my husband literally stumbled on the cross and excitedly brought it for me to see.

It was battered, missing all its seashells and the "pearls." Several of the tiny tiles were gone, but the wooden fish was still on the layered cross. To me, it was beautiful! I scrubbed the mud off it and thought about taking it back to the artist to get it repaired, but I think the "Katrina patina" makes it even more unique, so it is now hanging in a new home on a new hallway wall. It is truly a small miracle that it was found in mounds of splintered wood and debris.

St. Nicholas & Santa Claus Figures

For years, I have collected Santa Claus statues. I preferred the antique-looking ones of the St. Nicholas variety. I had them in ceramic, resin, cloth, papier-mâché' and plastic. Many had a "beach motif (Santas in swim-suits, with fishing gear, etc.) I estimate that I had between 40-50 of them.

About a week after the hurricane, while wandering in a daze on our tidal-swept property, I walked over to our neighbor's.

Looking down, I noticed a tiny face looking up out of the sand. It was one of my Santa Claus figures. Nearby was another; then another. Soon, I had about ten of them in my hands and had to go for a bag to carry them back to the tent.

Over the next several weeks, more turned up. My neighbor would yell across the downed fence and I would go over to see if it was mine. Some had names on the bottom; the name of the person who had given it to me, usually a teacher or staff member in the elementary school where I was secretary for 14 years. Some had the name of the artist; such as a wooden figure my daughter bought me in the French Quarter in New Orleans.

All were boxed away waiting the day when we would have a home. That time came in December 2006, when we were decorating our new "temporary" home. Each Santa was taken from its storage place and cleaned of leaves, twigs and mud inside. Some missed limbs; some missed paint, but all two dozen were beautiful on our new mantel!

The Christmas Cactus

When we were decorating our home for Christmas in 2006, with the decorations we salvaged from the hurricane debris, I mentioned to my husband that I sure missed our beautiful Christmas cactus. He had given it to me as a small plant years before and it had grown very large. A beautiful salmon-color, it sat (before Katrina) in a tall pink flamingo wire plant holder on our front porch, where it bloomed profusely.

A few days later, we were invited to our former neighbors' home for a glass of wine. While there, I couldn't help but notice the beautiful salmon-colored Christmas cactus on her dining table. When I remarked that we had one like it before the hurricane, she said, "It's yours." Thinking she was just being kind, I declined to take it. "No, she said, it's really yours!"

She explained that her husband had found several pieces of it that had taken root in their yard. He put them all in a pot, and it began to bloom just before Christmas and they brought it inside.

How it survived the salt water of the tidal surge, I will never know. She was very happy to find its owner, and we were delighted to have our beautiful plant back, after sixteen months!

Another small miracle!

The Christmas Stocking

Our first Christmas, in 1963, was spent in a tiny apartment near Mississippi State University. We were "poor as church mice," so when Christmas rolled around we looked for something to use as decorations.

We had cut down a small pine tree on a friend's father's farm and split a box of eighteen ornaments with the other couple. My husband and our friend had met in registration line; Steve, fresh from the Army, and my husband, just discharged from the Air Force. They were among the "older" freshmen on campus, and since they were former military, were not required to have their heads shaved, though they did have to wear the MSU beanies on their heads!

Scouring our apartment that December, we happened on a pair of military woolen socks, which my husband had worn in Thule, Greenland, where he was stationed during the Cuban Missile Crisis. I embroidered our names in sequins and added some festive trim from my sewing box. They looked good enough for one year, and we fully intended to eventually replace them. Somehow, we grew to love them and as years went on, we removed the tattered sequins and added silver holly leaves on our twenty-fifth wedding anniversary.

When Katrina took our home, it also took those Christmas stockings. Later, while walking the woods, looking through the neighborhood debris, we found his. Though we never found mine, it was a joyous thing to hang his once again in our "new" home.

Oh, and yes, my husband had the usual onion in the toe of his stocking, in memory of my father, who dropped one in his woolen stocking our first Christmas together.

The Kumquat Tree

We planted the tree in the early 1990's shortly after moving to Belle Fontaine Beach.

After living in the "big house" we remodeled the cottage and moved into it in November 1997. Thanksgiving dinner was the first meal we ate there, and the kumquats from the tree outside by the shed were decorations on the table.   Every holiday after that, we enjoyed fruit from the tree, often made into marmalade.

Hurricane Katrina's surge of salt water washed over all of the trees and plants on our acre of land. Many not toppled, slowly died over the next year. It was sad watching their demise. Beside the beautiful kumquat tree, which was filled with tiny green fruit that hot August day, there was also the grapefruit tree planted by my husband's father from seed, which after seven years on our property, had just begun to bear beautiful pink fruit.

Shortly after Christmas, an attorney friend, who rented our "big house" for several years after we moved to the cottage, called to invite us to dinner to meet his fiancé'.

"Remember those bags of kumquats I used to take to the youth court?" he asked. "Well, one of the ladies who worked there planted some of those seeds, and she has a little kumquat tree to give to you!"

What a Christmas miracle!

My I. D. Bracelet

When my husband and I were high school sweethearts, we exchanged photo I.D. bracelets, which were popular in the late 1950's. His was silver; mine was gold. They had our names engraved and contained photos under the nameplates.

All of our jewelry, except what we carried when we evacuated (and not expecting such a catastrophe, we didn't take much) was lost in the hurricane.

In the first weeks after the storm, his bracelet was located, very much damaged, but repairable. Mine was not

On January 3, 2007, slightly over sixteen months after the hurricane, I was walking in our neighbors' front yard. He had a contractor come and push the sand that had piled up on his lot back toward the beach. The scraping with the equipment blade had left a smooth sandy lot, which he encouraged me to walk through, as his daughter, whose cabin also washed away, had recently found some of her dishes in the sand, and most of our things had washed in that direction.

While walking about five feet from our property line, I noticed something gold pressed into the sand, round and shiny. I picked it up. Incredibly, it was my gold I.D. bracelet, as pretty as it was the day I received it, though covered with grit and sand.

I brought it home and cleaned it with naval jelly and silver polish. My name was still on the top, and my husband's name was on the reverse. What a blessing! What a miracle!

 


Honorable Mention

Bow-Quet

 by Jerusha Bosarge

 The day Jordan was born, the nurses at River Oaks Hospital twisted a tiny, peach-colored ribbon into a make-shift bow, and “glued” it to her dark, fuzzy head with K.Y. Jelly. I gently lifted all six pounds, fifteen ounces of swaddled, wiggling warmth from the glass-sided hospital bassinette, and fell in love. Everything about her was perfect: her crooked little toes escaping the pink and blue hospital blanket; her huge bright eyes, an enchanting blend of slate gray and baby blue,  her fuzzy, chestnut hair reflecting the fluorescent lights; and that bow. .. a tiny, perfect fragment of ribbon sitting daintily on the top of her head.

Jordan is four, now. She has worn a bow in her hair every day for four years. Well, okay, maybe not every day. Certainly there have been times when she was sick in bed, or perhaps just lazing around in her pajamas without a bow (we’re not obsessed or anything). But, in general, if Jordan is fully dressed, then she is wearing a bow in her hair. It is simply a part of who she is.

Naturally, Jordan was wearing a bow the day Mary Clare died. It was black. Looking back, I wonder why I didn’t see that as an omen. She never chooses black. “It’s too dark,” she protests. But that day, she chose it of her own free will to match her denim zoo-animal dress. She said it reminded her of Daniel.

Daniel’s last visit was in July. It took Rebecca and her four boys eighteen hours to get to our home in Jacksonville from Little Rock, Arkansas.  Jacob and Joshua were the oldest (8 and 6 respectively) and rode in the “way back” of the brown van. That way,  Rebecca could have easier access to the younger kids: Daniel (3) and David (1). Mary Clare rode inside Rebecca’s swollen belly.

Rebecca and the boys lived with us in Jacksonville for nearly a month. It was close quarters. Nine and a half people (including Mary Clare) were crammed into a two bedroom apartment with less than 1300 square feet of living space. But that didn’t bother us. It never did. Rebecca and I had endured far worse. Nothing could shake our friendship.

The highlight of our visit together was a trip to the Jacksonville Zoo. Jordan’s favorite part, as usual, was the reptile room. It was so funny to watch such a seemingly prissy little girl captivated by the dark and mysterious creatures. But, that’s Jordan. She often understands things that most people misunderstand. She sees beauty where others can not. Jordan and I both cried when Rebecca and the boys left this time. It was the last time I saw Rebecca’s true smile.

It was only a month after our trip to the zoo that Jordan chose the black bow to wear to pre-school. She seemed so grown up. The phone call came after I dropped her off. It was something about a twist in the umbilical cord, although they can never be certain. We left for Arkansas the next morning.

It’s hard to believe, sometimes, that tragic moments can happen on beautiful days. That’s how it felt on that unseasonably cool September morning in Arkansas. There wasn’t a single cloud in the brilliant blue sky. A steady, gentle breeze bathed the landscape in sweet soft birdsong.  It was difficult to comprehend the contrasting sorrow that filled the church. Every eye wept, transfixed upon the tiny doll-sized coffin draped in white and surrounded by candles. Mary Clare. When Mass ended, the boys helped their father carry their sister to the hearse.

“Where are Mary Clare’s flowers, Mommy?” Jordan asked softly. “Big Mama had lots of flowers when she died. Where are Mary Clare’s?” Big Mama was Jordan’s great grandmother. She died two months before.

“Every funeral is different, Sweetie.” I replied. She frowned as the long procession of cars wound its way toward the cemetery. I opened the window of our minivan, struggling for a firmer grasp on reality. The birds were still singing. Jordan was wearing a white bow with a pink and white smocked dress.  Could this really be happening?

Mary Clare arrived first, and was gently suspended above a deep hole in the earth. The burial service began as darkly-clad mourners filed between rows of fold out chairs. Jordan pulled my sleeve, “Mommy, I still don’t see any flowers.”

“It’s okay, Sweetie. Not all funerals have flowers.” I tried to redirect my attention to the service, but Jordan would no longer look at the coffin. From the corner of my eye, I could see her head turning to look around the cemetery.

After a final prayer, we were dismissed. Jordan, Abigail (Jordan‘s baby sister), and I walked around a bit while waiting for the receiving line to dissipate. Jordan searched the ground intently. “What are you looking for, Sweetheart?”

“I’m trying to find flowers for Mary Clare.”

“That’s really sweet, Jordan. But, it’s okay that she doesn’t have flowers. She has our love.”

“I know, but I still want to give her some.”

Together, we searched the cemetery for wildflowers, but found only brown grass and weeds. “Don’t worry, Jordan. We can buy her some from the store and bring them back later.”

“But her funeral is right now!” Jordan was plainly distressed. She walked mournfully back to Mary Clare’s coffin, as I checked on the status of the receiving line. Almost done. I glanced back toward Jordan, and decided to join her beside the coffin.

As I began pushing Abigail’s umbrella stroller over the dry, uneven lawn, I paused in mid-stride. Jordan was talking to Mary Clare.  ‘What is she doing?’ I thought as Jordan reached up to her head with both hands. She was struggling with something. Then she pulled the white, satin bow from her hair.As she refastened the bow’s metal clasp, Jordan spoke a few more words before placing it on top of the tiny coffin. Then, with a gentle flick of her fingers, she waved goodbye and walked away. Jordan never mentioned the flowers again.

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