Pointing to the Brain 

 

First Place

by Christopher Hannan

Metarie LA

 

A child knows picking is original sin.

The hand of God from Eden’s finger flicked

the first who reached up in the tree to pick

from underneath His nose the fruit within.

 

Their eyes were glazed as they fingered the apple,

deep like breath at the pluck and release;

dilated eyes of the child whose pointer seeks

to reach that luring spot above his knuckle.

 

They picked the fruit of god to taste the flesh

forbidden in the limbs whose leaves would screen

our inability to sate the need

to reach for things our bodies can’t resist

 

You laugh at the driver whose sinuses grow

like apples at red lights.  They make him reach

to pick at what he wasn’t made to reap:

that goddamned spot that all our picking knows.

 

The biblical knowledge of good and evil

sowed itself like stinkweed in our brains

so every time the apples itch again

we reach and point to pick at them a little.

 

And no disgusted stares of  passersby,

no angry mother’s “get that out your nose!”;

the word of God Himself cannot deny

the old temptation we cannot outgrow.

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